tell me what i can improve on okay

Well, you may want to make your review a bit longer next time. Try and stretch it out a bit. Other than that, I agree that the Graphics were not as good as they could have been. They were Much better than Prototypes Graphics though. Overall it took me about 30 hours to beat it, which is pretty good for an open world game.

inFamous is one of the greatest games I have ever played. Top 10 of all-time action games. I have no idea what this reviewer was thinking while writing the review. inFamous has everything. Extraordinary graphics. Perfect user controls. Amazing story line. Interesting character development. Best of all, it's like having two full games rolled into one because you can play the game as either a good superhero or evil villain, each being completely different with different missions. It took me about 40 total hours to complete inFamous both ways. $59.99 @ gamestop and worth every penny.

inFamous gets a perfect 10 in my book.

there sure are stuff you can to your review like : why you think the game has poor story tellin and etc . explain what you find in the game interesting or not interesting . what made you laugh or ruin it . you'll get it right after a few time ^^ .
btw : infamous deserve something like 9/10 IMO . it's an excelence game .

@Superdynamite

As far as "Perfect user controls." I disagree. I only played the demo, but I found the controls non-intuitive. I tried blatently running off of a ledge and couldn't, then I noticed I'd start randomly crawling up walls I happened to be running next to, but when I wanted to willfully crawl up walls, I couldn't.

"I have no idea what this reviewer was thinking while writing the review."

Not everyone has the same opinions as you. He has every right to say this game sucks, and you have every right to say it's awesome.

@ID123

If you want to write a review for a game, go look at some other reviews and check out their format. A lot of people break it into categories such as graphics, story, controls, music, replayablity, etc. and they rate those categories on a scale of 1 to 10.

Use a couple of examples such as the one I used above where I got annoyed because I couldn't run off of a ledge.

K thanks

Ya, you could defidently make your reviews longer. And a good way to do that is not to write in short form such as instead of writing "2 much" you could write "to much" and stuff like that it also makes the review more presentable. And while in my review i gave it five out of five but in your review you gave it 4 out of five that's your opinion and i respect that.

i agree with bridgerbot